Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Good job Zoe for giving a go at this week's learning.
ReplyDeleteHello Zoe, Its me Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you "wirte" the story.
maybe you could fill the page with more detail so the page doesn't look so blank.
I really like how you said "farming is good for the environment" because i agree with that.
Please rely to this comment if you can :D