I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde slide show is really cool, I think it’s really clever how you’ve got vidos in your slide show, though they are a bit small. The photos you picked and smoky background are really good too, making your blog post really interesting to look at.
You have got a few names of her songs but be really careful about following the instructions of the activities so you can get the points on offer next week. I’m really excited to hear what you have to say in these activities.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more amazing work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde slide show is really cool, I think it’s really clever how you’ve got vidos in your slide show, though they are a bit small. The photos you picked and smoky background are really good too, making your blog post really interesting to look at.
You have got a few names of her songs but be really careful about following the instructions of the activities so you can get the points on offer next week. I’m really excited to hear what you have to say in these activities.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more amazing work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel