thoughtful: i really like this post and how it has a description and title. i like how you explained why bulling is bad for people and how they can kill themself.
Positive: i really like how you said how you got bullied and how you got over that bullying on social media!
Helpful: you should of said 'make sure to be careful on social media because the things that happend to me will maybe happen to you.' anyway i really like the post Zoe!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
heyyyyyy zoe its Grace i didnt know you were in kahikatea hub
ReplyDeletehi Zoe! its Ryleigh.
ReplyDeletethoughtful: i really like this post and how it has a description and title. i like how you explained why bulling is bad for people and how they can kill themself.
Positive: i really like how you said how you got bullied and how you got over that bullying on social media!
Helpful: you should of said 'make sure to be careful on social media because the things that happend to me will maybe happen to you.' anyway i really like the post Zoe!